YA Novels: Hooked in Five Sentences or Less

It's late at night. You've just finished a book on your e-reader and are dying for something new to read. But how much time will you give a sample chapter to lure you in?

For me personally, I've found that new late-night reads need to hook me in five sentences or less, that way I can sink my teeth into them right away

I've chosen three excerpts from books I've loved that have 'hooked me in five sentences or less'. I'll tell you why they appealed to me as a READERS and what we can take away as WRITERS.

From The Selection by Kiera Cass

When we got the letter in the post, my mother was ecstatic. She had already decided that all our problems were solved, gone forever. The big hitch in her plan brilliant plan was me.

AS A READER: I'm loving the title, and the fact that there is a mysterious letter. I love mail! I also immediately like this girl.

AS A WRITER: Right away we are hearing the MC's voice and already know of a conflict brewing.



From Between Shade of Gray by Ruta Sepetys

They took me in my nightgown. Thinking back, the signs were there -- family photos burned in the fireplace, Mother sewing her best silver into the lining of her coat late at night, and Papa not returning from work.

AS A READER: I can feel that this is a historical novel that sucks you into its time and place right away. I want to know what happens to this girl.

AS A WRITER: The MC's voice, character, and family are introduced right away. You are also informed about into a huge conflict the MC faces.



From Paranormalcy by Kiersten White

"Wait -- did you -- You just yawned!" The vampire's arms, raised over his head in the Classic Dracula pose, dropped to his sides. He pulled his exaggerated white fangs back behind his lips. "What, imminent death isn't exciting enough for you?"

AS A READER: I can't help it. I love paranormal. And I loved this because right away I knew it was different -- it was funny!

AS A WRITER: The writer takes a normal subject and brings her own twist in a humorous way, enticing readers to read more and find out what her 'different' is all about.

What books have you read that have hooked you in five sentences or less?

11 Tips for Maintaining a Daily Writing Habit

This summer I've made a deal with myself -- write something new every morning, Monday-Friday. I can't move on (with submissions, revisions, etc.) until I've written something new. At first it was like scratching nails over a chalkboard. I'd talk myself out of it for at least a dozen different reasons. It's been a few weeks now, and I'm on the daily writing train showing no signs of derailing. I decided to share 11 tips that have helped me so far.






1. Set a schedule and stick to it!

2. Make new writing the first thing you do in your writing time.

3. Avoid Social media and the Internet at all costs.

4. Ignore the little voice in your mind that says "Aw...can't I do this later? Or tomorrow even?

5. Even if you don't feel ready, go to your writing space and open your work in progress.

6. Having more than one work in progress or an idea file comes in handy, just in case you're truly stuck on your main project.

7. If all else fails, write a journal entry.

8. Don't stop until you've reached your allotted time or word count.

9. Reward yourself for a job well done! Some writers allow themselves one jellybean or skittle after every hundred words. Others enjoy a special cup of tea or coffee or a trip to Starbucks. Find out what works for you.

10. Keep a daily writing log to track your progress. Being able to see what you've completed in a week visually is a huge motivator. (A sneaky side note for highly visual folks: You can replace your daily writing desktop icon to one similar to the photo above. That way you know it's a special writing only file.)

11. Sign up for a writing forum to discuss your progress with other writers. It helps knowing others out there have similar goals. Sometimes it's the highlight of my day knowing I can share that I've made my daily writing goal with others.

I hope some of these tips help you maintain a daily writing habit. Happy Writing!

Getting out of my bubble -- My SDSU Writer's Conference Experience

I love attending writer's conferences, workshops, and critique groups with fellow children's and young adult writers.  I get to spend time with like-minded, spirited individuals who love children's books as much as I do.  And, I don't get people looking at me funny for enjoying them either!

This past summer, I received a wonderful piece of advice while attending a Children's Writers Schmooze -- 'Expand your horizons.  Don't limit yourself to events just for children's writers. Branch out! Explore events for other genres as well.'

I percolated over the idea for some time and finally decided to take the plunge.  I signed up for the SDSU Writer's Conference in San Diego, and will be posting recaps of it very soon! Writers from all genres were present at this event -- and I was very nervous to attend.  I am so happy I did! Most sessions didn't address my genre specifically, but nonetheless I was able to pick out information relevant to me and soak it all in. I was also exposed to many ideas about the new digital and technological world of publishing (more on that soon too.)

One of my favorite sessions was put on by author, Angela Hunt, entitled Evoking Emotion.  It was wonderful!  She had a box of tissues on the counter for all of us -- just in case.  I didn't think I would need them, but oh how wrong I was about that!  She used various videos as discussion points in discovering how they evoked such a strong emotional response.  Take a look at the video below about Christian the Lion Cub and see what I mean.  (The singer featured in the video is the Late Whitney Houston.  May she rest in peace.  My heart goes out to her family and friends.)